Please make me a member

I watch a lot of minecraft multiplayer commentaries, and I have always wanted to do those with my friends. I want to go on a server where I can just do survival off alone with my friends, with my own goals and just having fun surviving. Your server was highly recommended and I would like more privileges. I think that being a member to your server would be great. It has been very hard to find a very good and open server like yours, and i use wi-fi, so it would be practically impossible to make my own server. I love minecraft on its own, but it becomes much better with friends, because you can set out to accomplish your own goals. I bought a newish laptop so I could play on better servers, and i hope i can make my home on yours.

Could you add a couple more sentences to this please.

Lack of length isn't the problem, just actual material.

I can run a server without lag on wifi...